Let us go then You and I
Let us go then, you and I,
when the road uncoils like a thought not
yet spoken,
past many trees holding their breath
and houses that may never care to know us.
The morning bursts here
not with sirens and screeches
but like an old sentence
with refreshed vigour.
Men and women are in a hurry
though this is just a village.
Schools, colleges, and offices
beckon everyone
like sirens on the ancient island.
A decade has gone by from
when you and I walked
a serene campus
that was encroached
rather abruptly by
some religious faces
with plastic smiles
and poisonous hearts.
Today, the village road looks at me
without recognition.
A wall is being painted saffron.
The paint is still wet.
PS. A niece of mine gifted me
a phone holder for my car and I chose to try it out by videographing my morning
ride to Maggie’s school (which was mine too till the other day). As I watched
the video, the above poem emerged somewhere within me…
The poem's Eliotean touch may be excused, I hope.
I have doubled the speed of the video to shorten it. My actual drive to school is 5-6 minutes.
Hari Om
ReplyDeleteAn exhilarating ride and worthy poem! YAM xx
I'm seeing my own driving for the first time 😊
DeleteThat video looked like a high-speed chase! ... Only when I read the note at the end of the post, I realised that you had doubled the speed of the video!
ReplyDeleteTo match the mood of the poem, probabaly, you could have taken a part of the video and ran it the normal speed or even slowed the speed a bit.
Coming to the poem, quite a nice one. Enjoyed reading it. :-)
I was aware of the disparity between the video and the poem. But my technical awareness is poor. That's why.
DeleteIt only takes you 6 minutes to get to the school? Nice. (My drive is more like 20 minutes.)
ReplyDeleteJust 4 km. We cross two rivers in that short span, only the bridges are visible in the video.
DeleteBeautiful poem, Loved your video. Great.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
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