Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem

I'm writing a poem, don't disturb, I said.
Broken lines is not poem, she said.
Broken dreams are, I said.

18 comments:

  1. Amazing what you can put across in just three lines!

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  2. Sir..you spoke heart out in just few words :) Jai Ho ! :)

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  3. To be laconic in a way that is profound is the essence of writing and here we have a sample of it with poetical perfection. That is simply superb.

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  4. Yes, broken dreams make a good basis for poem but then our life is usually full of broken dreams. Does this mean our life too is a poem?

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  5. Hi! It's been a while. I never read a poem by you before. It was tasty.

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    1. Hi Shovon, it was splendid to see you in today's Hindu Literary Supplement. All the best for yur novel. I'll read it.

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  6. Brilliant Haiku-like crispness! hhm broken dreams!

    I told my husband another poem:
    Cinema is a poem of life for two hours.

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    1. Oh, no, wings. Not every movie. Yu should have watched what was screened yesterday: the sound was utter flop.

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  7. Beautiful,touching and true....Thanks!

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