I'm writing a poem, don't disturb, I said.
Broken lines is not poem, she said.
Broken dreams are, I said.
Broken lines is not poem, she said.
Broken dreams are, I said.
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That is so true. Profound.
ReplyDeletehmmmm so true
ReplyDeletebeautiful... :)
ReplyDeleteright :).........
ReplyDeletewow .. !
ReplyDeleteप्रभावी !!!
ReplyDeleteशुभकामना
आर्यावर्त
great and 100% right
ReplyDeletePoignant... :-(
ReplyDeleteAmazing what you can put across in just three lines!
ReplyDeleteSir..you spoke heart out in just few words :) Jai Ho ! :)
ReplyDeleteTo be laconic in a way that is profound is the essence of writing and here we have a sample of it with poetical perfection. That is simply superb.
ReplyDeleteYes, broken dreams make a good basis for poem but then our life is usually full of broken dreams. Does this mean our life too is a poem?
ReplyDeleteHi! It's been a while. I never read a poem by you before. It was tasty.
ReplyDeleteHi Shovon, it was splendid to see you in today's Hindu Literary Supplement. All the best for yur novel. I'll read it.
DeleteBeautiful and deep!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant Haiku-like crispness! hhm broken dreams!
ReplyDeleteI told my husband another poem:
Cinema is a poem of life for two hours.
Oh, no, wings. Not every movie. Yu should have watched what was screened yesterday: the sound was utter flop.
DeleteBeautiful,touching and true....Thanks!
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