Krishna Hari is a class 12 student. She writes stunning poems which carry evocative images and provoking metaphors. As her English teacher, I am proud to feature one of her poems in this space.
Krishna Hari |
The old birds in my yard⠀
Fly away to distant lands⠀
For deceptive summer eves have come⠀
Yet again with their wild rains⠀
And malicious clouds.⠀
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I sit on my balcony cross-legged⠀
Sipping warm whiskey⠀
Watching the sunset paint ⠀
The northern skies sepia.⠀
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I hear the rustling leaves of the devil's trees⠀
Within the premises of that old temple by the lake⠀
Where women used to worship serpents and fairies once⠀
Collapsed into a rubble of stones with time.⠀
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Eerie questions suck on the abysses
Under my skin like leeches⠀
And I feel as if I'm⠀
On the edge of an apocalypse.⠀
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I ask, "Who makes leaves fall in autumn"?⠀
"Why were thorny roses prettier than tranquil jasmines"?⠀
"Where do old birds go to die ?⠀
Do they ever cry for their wrinkled destinies ?⠀
Do their tears fall off from their homes in the highs of heavenly trees ?⠀
Do their nestlings weep at their demises?"⠀
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I heave a deep sigh into the cold air⠀
Close my eyes and see old birds going to die.⠀
And I tell myself⠀
'Maybe I'll mourn their death at my own grave.'
Beautiful, poignant and painting visual poetry
ReplyDeleteThis is poignant and deep. My compliments to her.
ReplyDeleteYou made me think. I have never ever thought of this. Fantastic Krishna Hari and the inspiration behind you Tomichan.
ReplyDeleteI can't claim to be her inspiration, Victor. She is a poet in her own right. I just encourage her.
DeleteThe greatest reward a student can receive is the teachers who are proud of them.. U r a great & blessed Teacher �� congrats to her��
DeleteWonderful poem👏👏
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, best wishes to her.
ReplyDeleteThe images it creates are beautiful and intense! Kudos to the young poet! Such a privilege to be featured by her teacher. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm sure the young poet will be glad to know that this appreciation comes from an artist of considerable renown.
DeleteHonored, Sir! I am yet to reach there but glad that bestow me with one! :)
DeleteVery Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem!
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